tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-697374478580727783.post8084070308042282329..comments2009-04-16T18:25:48.102-04:00Jonah K. Haslaphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00146984421653461218noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-697374478580727783.post-48413837613341294452009-04-16T18:25:00.000-04:002009-04-16T18:25:00.000-04:00checking in - wondering if you're still around? (saying that, realizing that I myself haven't blogged in 4 - 5 months)<br /><br />I hope that your absence means that you're writing your book and have no time for extra-curricular writing.Bobhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13690660290319444722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-697374478580727783.post-26321541881192786202009-02-11T11:32:00.000-05:002009-02-11T11:32:00.000-05:00This was terrific reading Jonah. You have some serious talent going on there! Lay some more of it on me baby...Karenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01863189624045706074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-697374478580727783.post-22078624540636586902009-02-04T20:43:00.000-05:002009-02-04T20:43:00.000-05:00It keeps moving, good characterization, the background stuff is all there w/o being tedious, and the whole thing is quite engaging. The tension builds nicely when we learn that Jonah's judge has been assigned the Salaam case, and the guy on the subway bit is great, including the ACLU card/racial profiling conflict.<BR/><BR/>I would have liked to know Peter better, but you chose a perfect place to begin. <BR/><BR/>Thanks for sharing, Jonah. I look forward to the next chapter.heartinsanfranciscohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07535397382991383931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-697374478580727783.post-22058281591461440612009-02-03T14:16:00.000-05:002009-02-03T14:16:00.000-05:00Oh Lion, imitation is the sincerest form of flattery. Unless you're imitating a jackass, then you're just a jackass too.<BR/><BR/>Bob, if only my parents were equally supportive of me when I was a kid as you are. Well, if they were as supportive as you are when I was a kid, I wouldn't be such a tortured adult, therefore would not be a writer (or, this kind of writer). It's like one of those time paradoxes from Back to the Future.<BR/><BR/>Jazz, stop by when you're done and say hi again!Jonah K. Haslaphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00146984421653461218noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-697374478580727783.post-75998195505594852012009-02-03T09:26:00.000-05:002009-02-03T09:26:00.000-05:00Yay! another installment! Can't wait to read it.<BR/><BR/>I'd be afraid someone would steal it, being posted on the net and all, but I'm paranoid.Jazzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14644896022880634803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-697374478580727783.post-6865120447010888352009-02-02T11:03:00.000-05:002009-02-02T11:03:00.000-05:00as engaging as the first, looking forward to more.<BR/><BR/>Whatever you choose to write.Bobhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13690660290319444722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-697374478580727783.post-36587626521679641222009-02-01T21:29:00.000-05:002009-02-01T21:29:00.000-05:00Daisy the beagle sounds delightful. I have to get myself one of those...<BR/><BR/>A great 2nd chapter. I could definitely use a return to the old Jonah for at least one or 2 of your next posts, but I must say you are entertaining me regardless of which type of content you are sharing!<BR/><BR/>And, seriously. I think I'll get myself my own little Daisy...lioneyesnoreply@blogger.com